[link] dude this is like my favorite pic. I found it on google/deviantart and i had to find you to say i love this pic and it's the inspiration to helping me finish two concept drawings i'v been trying to get done. One is to draw a concept of a Vampire Count / Space Marine and the other is of a Chaos Space marine that looks a bit like the Vampire knights from Oliver Ledroits graphic novel Requiem. The Vampire Knights have helms are very much like the one you drew for the Chaplin.
The Black Templars are that bad ass, yes, and you really do them justice. The bulky power armour, the seals, the weapons, all feel like 40K - your attention to detail is amazing. The dust around him and packed, bare ground do a good job of making the figure solitary, and, as a friend of mine said when he saw it, I'd do what he said, no problem.